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Mimi Fofinha
25/07/2016 às 18:27 • Capítulo 1
O que acha que precisa ser melhorado?
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Resposta do Autor [Rafaelah]: Obrigadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa amoreee, tbm amooooo a sua fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ♥
beckyfiuza
31/03/2016 às 21:25 • Capítulo 2
Muito bom!! Não sei se você já mudou o estilo de escrita, porque eu li só até esse capítulo, mas pode escrever capítulos mais longos, fica cansativo não!
Resposta do Autor [Rafaelah]: Oii!sim, acho que mudei o meu estilo de escrita várias vezes, mas sempre com um toque pessoal. Gosto de experimentar, e por enquanto esse está sendo meu estilo de escrita, estou me identificando nele. Sério? Que bom! Você acertou um dos meus medos, que a história fique cansativa com capítulos longos, mas pode deixar que eu aumento eles Okay?!
Beijinhos
♥
Mimi Fofinha
25/07/2016 às 18:29 • Capítulo 2
O que acha que precisa ser melhorado?
nada quantas vezes eu vou ter que falar?O que mais gostou no capítulo?
tudo vc ainda não entendeu?ameiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
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Resposta do Autor [Rafaelah]: Linda quantas vezes eu vo te q te dizer: NADA A VER, vc é MUITO criativa SIM! Amei a ideia da sua fic!
Beijinhos! ♥
camilasilva142801
20/02/2016 às 21:30 • Capítulo 4
ai meu amei, e esse final, America na enfermaria por essa eu não esperava, sera que por causa disso America não vai esquecer Aspen já gostei!!! #TeamAspenForeve
Resposta do Autor [Rafaelah]: Que bom que você gostou linda! Ainda tem muita surpresa pela frente...!!
Beijinhos!
beckyfiuza