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Perfeito.Parabéns
Resposta do Autor [ZoeySummers]: Obrigada!!!! Beijos!
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Arqueiroarcano
30/08/2011 às 23:15 • The Curse of The Fallen Angel
Just loved it!
You know, you really shouldn't post anything in any language other than portuguise, but who cares?
It's very sad, but at the same time it's wonderful!
you write very well, congratulations!
You know, you really shouldn't post anything in any language other than portuguise, but who cares?
It's very sad, but at the same time it's wonderful!
you write very well, congratulations!
Resposta do Autor [ZoeySummers]: Thank you so much!!! Yeah, I've thought on that before post it but... like you've said, who the hell cares, muahuahauahuahauhau!! And I really gotta say again, thank you!
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Arqueiroarcano
02/10/2011 às 12:35 • My Beloved One
Beautiful.
Well written, you've done a good job, but the beaty of this piece of poetry relies on its sincerity. It's so sincere that it almost hurts.
We usually only discover whatever it's real or not when it's way too late.
The universe is almost perfect. It has an almost perfect law. Every single thing but one can be answered just by saying yes or no. The only exception are us. Be cause, when it comes to people, you can never just say yes or no, black or white, right or wrong, good or evil. everithing is maybe, everuthing is gray, everything is somewhere in the borderline, everything is relative.
Wanna an advice?
Don't hurry with anything. Be pacient. Let time do it own work. Everything comes in the right moment, with the right person, on the right place. And guess what: that's what makes life worth living.
And, congratulations, be cause you write very well, and good luck.
Well written, you've done a good job, but the beaty of this piece of poetry relies on its sincerity. It's so sincere that it almost hurts.
We usually only discover whatever it's real or not when it's way too late.
The universe is almost perfect. It has an almost perfect law. Every single thing but one can be answered just by saying yes or no. The only exception are us. Be cause, when it comes to people, you can never just say yes or no, black or white, right or wrong, good or evil. everithing is maybe, everuthing is gray, everything is somewhere in the borderline, everything is relative.
Wanna an advice?
Don't hurry with anything. Be pacient. Let time do it own work. Everything comes in the right moment, with the right person, on the right place. And guess what: that's what makes life worth living.
And, congratulations, be cause you write very well, and good luck.
DudaB